In this assignment you will be rewriting and critiquing the proposal provided HERE. There are at least six improvements to be made in the document. Your job is to identify the six improvements and then, using track changes, rewrite or fix the error. Also, using the comments tool, give a brief explanation to why it is wrong and why you fixed it the way you did. Note: If your word processing program does not have track changes, you will need to insert comments in brackets using red font at the improvement location.
In your document, you should:
Your assignment must follow these formatting requirements:
1. Thoroughly identified at least six proposal weaknesses using track changes.
2. Thoroughly included a critique paragraph of at least 150 words at the end of the document.
3. Thoroughly discussed improvements for each of the weaknesses in your critique.
4. Thoroughly ensured both the comments and critique are concise and error-free.
5. 0-2 errors present
Note: Attachment 1 is the proposal you will edit.
Attachment 2 is sample submitted Proposal by my class mate.